Monday, February 6, 2012

Narrative paragraph turned into poem 

Based on my paragraph

If sunsets dawned
And
The ground crunched overhead
            It would make more sense to me.
If time
            Crawled
                        Slowly
                                    Backwards
Then I could happier rest on this cement.

Instead the world moves
On
As it has before
            And here I sit at a loss for words.
My words
            Poured
                        Steadily
                                    Forth
Until I ran into country named but unknown.

Love,

It is morning glory
That
Grows and will not die
            Nor is it sated but by
A glimpse of the object
                        Of its colors.
A weed
            Planted
                        Secretly
                                    Within
Unwanted, yet precious as the one for whom it blooms

When was it
That
You slipped the seedlings
            Into my cup?
You have
            Stood
                        awkwardly
                                    uncomprehending
Why? Heart of my heart you have renamed yourself to me

I offer these my blossoms
which
you yourself have watered.
            Why will you not take them? Strange
That you
            Are
                        Genuinely
                                    Loved
Of me: an unexpected effect of your green thumb.

Come then
And
Uproot this plant you have
            So tenderly nursed to life. Choke
This weed
            Grown
                        Unwisely
                                    Here
Or see me as I am: A helpless flowerpot.
                       
(word count: 185)


Based on DS's paragraph


In second grade I had a friend named Yuri S,
Wearing stripes of green and yellow.
All of my memories of him take place
In ELF park. He was so creative.
He turned the woodchips from lava to
Shark-infested waters. If your foot
Touched briefly as you traversed
The playground, you had a chance
Of survival.

I had a friend named Yuri S
For only one year.
How could we remember each other?

Here, he said on our last bus-ride,
Take this half of a paperclip.
That way we’ll always remember
And always be friends.
This? This was supposed to remind me of
Short dark hair, big teeth, and an imagination
As wild as the handshake we gave
Each other in parting.
I lost the paperclip before long,
Desperately searching my memories to make
Sure he hadn’t disappeared with it.

I looked into my mind, searching, and
In second grade I had a friend named Yuri S,
Wearing stripes of green and yellow.

(word count: 162)
  

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